Summer Poem

k Kays tell me if my poem skills have improved at all:

I walk over to my bike in the warm air, so comforting like a blanket
the sky so bright blue lush green grass

I put my sunglasses on and peddle down to the beach
smelling the new fresh air
waves sounding like nature song
I take my flip flops off, feel the sand, finding the urge to sing
walking over to the water, so refreshingly cold
as I peddle back, I see my kitty waiting for me
I walk over to the hammock and put him on my lap
rocking back and forth just like the waves
as I fall to sleep in this summer wonderland


I did this poem last minute lol